Tuesday's Assignment

Editing Exercise:

Task 1:

Find how many mistakes are in the following two passages, underline them and then write the correct form of the verb.

1.     This is my classroom, and these is  my classmates. My best friend’s name is Andrew. He writes on the blackboard. My other friend Amy is being funny. She is talking and tells jokes to Bradely. They not listening to the teacher. The kid in the front row throwing a paper airplane. The teacher looks at the map, so she don’t see the airplane. He is always misbehave. I standing near the window looking outside. It’s a beautiful day. I am wishing I could go outside right now.

2.     Sarah has a party. All of her friends are inviting. Sarah wearing a new green skirt. Her friends all are looking nice too. They are listen to music and dancing, and talking. Some people are sitting on the couch and watch TV. It’s a fun party! Rachel dances with Peter. They are having a lot in common. They both likes jazz music and horror movies. On the backyard people sitting beside the swimming pool. Suddenly Malika fall into the pool. Everyone laugh…even Malika! Now her clothes is wet. Everybody are having a great time. Nobody want to go home!

Task 2:

     Ask two of your classmates to edit your work before you publish it. Write down their names on top of your work as “Edited by…… and ……”