Tuesday's Assignment
First Task:
In order to prepare everyone for the coming assessment, pick one situation from your life that
would need you to write a letter/email, utilize the openings, closings, prepositional collocations, and punctuation rules that we have just learnt to write a formal letter on
it.
Second Task:
After reading, please complete the following tasks:
1. Answer the questions on a Word doc.
2. Pick from five to six new vocabulary
words, idioms and phrasal verbs; then put them in sentences of your own.
3. Write a quick summary of the article using
all the new vocabulary that you have picked, and then write your own point of
view on that topic, but do not exceed 100 words max.
4. Make sure to ask two of
your classmates to edit your work before saving, then send the word doc to your
personal email and print once you are done.
5. Write a comment on the blog to
describe this cartoon.
First task:
ReplyDeleteTo whom it may concern:
I am writing to complain about the poor service I received at your store.
I am very upset about the way I was treated by one of your sales staff. I asked one of the salesperson to help me in my request, but he did not come back to me. I waited about 15 minutes but he did not show up; I left the store without the stuff that I asked about.
Please give this matter your immediate attention.
Thank you,
Amneh Abdulrahim
Thanks Amneh, well done
DeleteYasmin Akther
ReplyDelete1112-75 Havenbrook Blvd.
Toronto, ON
M2J1A8
June 03, 2014
Mr. Hanif Chowdhury
1210 Bayview Rd.
Toronto, ON
M5C 4W7
Dear Chowdhury:
I would be delighted to for your letter dated May 30, 2014. I am glad to you accepted me for the position of administration.
I am writing to request that when I will join in your company as a administrative officer. Then I will send you my joining letter.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Best Regards,
Yasmin Akther
Good Yasmin, but the first paragraph needs revision.
DeleteAsena Turaner
ReplyDelete1503-65 Forest Manor Road
Toronto, On, M2J 1M5
July 3, 2014
Mr.Theresa Greenny
150 graydon Hall
Gorge Henrey High school
Dear Ms. Greenny
I am writing to confirm you about Turkan will be leaving school on July 14, because she has a ticket to going to her country for summer vacation. Could you please give her permission two day sooner than this day so that she can prepare her stuff for her vacation?
Yours sincerely,
Asena Turaner
Thanks Asena, but you need to review the pronouns again. and spacing.
DeleteFirst task:
ReplyDeleteDear Mrs Mohan: June 3, 2014
I would like to thank you for your letter dated` June 2. I am writing to apologize for Ziad’s attitude at school. I discussed with him about this and he promised me, he will not do that again.
Please forgive him. Thank you for your notes and care.
Best regards,
Maha
Thanks Maha, you forget to add the inside address, and date needs to be adjusted again.
DeleteOMG, Hala it is too long so i will try to complet it at home
ReplyDeleteJune 3
ReplyDeleteDear Mr Bogdan,
My name is Annie, the owner of 18 sing star way, north york.
I cannot open my garage door from outside today. It looks like the cable broken? Can you please send some technician to check?
It's better to fix it before Monday, otherwise I cannot dispose the waste(garbage).
Regards,
Annie
Good job Annie, you only need to add the inside address and complimentary closing as well.
DeleteDear Ms. Leen: May 6,2o14
ReplyDeleteI would like to thank you for your letter dated may 5, 2014.I am writing to inform you that my son sultan has a problem on his hand. I would like to discuss that with you on Monday,may9, at 3:20pm if it is suitable for you.
Thank you for your help.
Best wishing,
samira
Thanks Samira; you need to revise the use of capital letters, spacing, and add the inside address.
DeleteDear Ms. Green: 3 June 2014
ReplyDeleteMy name is Chang Liu. Today I found my bank statement and my cheques had the wrong name. Would you please check my account information and change my last name to Liu.
The account number is 01-1234
If there any question, please call me at 416-555-1234 between 7 p.m and 9 p.m.
Thank you.
Chang Liu
Very good Chang, but you have missed the purpose of the letter on the first line. ''I am writing to ask for a name change....''
ReplyDelete