Monday's Assignment

Fragments & Run-ons

Add the correct punctuation and/or words to the following sentences to correct them.

1. While keeping pets is fun. It is also a big responsibility.

2. Pets can cause problems. Jumping up and down and scratching furniture.

3. The field trip to the zoo has been cancelled. Because all of the children are sick today.

4. Ms. Webster, our English teacher, was very cool. Allowing the paper to be handed in late.

5. We had a feast for dinner. After the roast was cooked.

6. The choir sang Christmas carols. The entire evening.

7. Jackie enjoys baking and eating desserts. Especially chocolate cake.

8. We could not finish rehearsing. Since we were completely out of time.

9. The team went out for pizza to celebrate. Having won the championship.

10. We aced the test. Because we studied all night.

Mark C for a complete sentence, and mark F for a fragment.  Make the fragments into complete sentences by adding a subject, a verb, or both, and a period at the end.

1.    _____I was late for class

2.    _____As we wait for the rain to stop

3.    _____When Alex phones

4.    _____She goes to Centennial College

5.    _____Until you eat your vegetables

6.    _____They plan to visit Nova Scotia this summer

7.    _____Ate at a famous restaurant

8.    _____Even though I was tired

9.    _____For example, hockey and skating

10._____After she finished her essay

Directions: If the group of words is a complete sentence, write S. If the group of words is a fragment, write F. Add the correct punctuation and/or words to the following sentences to correct them.

______ 1. Antarctica has the highest average elevation of the seven continents.

______ 2. Because it is too cold.

______ 3. Although scientists and other workers live in Antarctica for about a year at a time.

______ 4. Examine the ozone layer, sleep patterns, and fish survival in subzero temperatures.

______ 5. Ninety-five percent of Antarctica covered with ice.

______ 6. Even though Antarctica is covered in ice and snow, it can be considered a desert.

______ 7. Antarctica receives only two inches of rain each year.

______ 8. Sometimes winds as high as 200 miles per hour.

______ 9. Many animals in the ocean around Antarctica.

______ 10. Antarctica so isolated that its snow and ice are very pure.

Directions: If the group of words is correct, write C; if it is a run-on, write R. Revise each run-on sentence by (1) making it two separate sentences or (2) using a comma and a coordinating conjunction or (3) adding a semicolon.

______ 1. Brown bears include the grizzly and the kodiak, the largest brown bear is the kodiak.

______ 2. Kodiak bears weigh as much as 1,700 pounds, they grow to a height of ten feet.

______ 3. Bears can live more than 30 years in the wild.

______ 4. Bears’ sense of smell is more developed than their hearing or sight.

______ 5. Females give birth to as many as four cubs, the cubs stay with their mother two or three years.

______ 6. Many people are afraid of bears, encounters with bears are actually infrequent.

______ 7. Grizzly bears are solitary animals, they do not want to interact with people.

______ 8. Generally, bears attack only when they are surprised, or when they are protecting their young.

______ 9. People should always store food and garbage properly, bears could be attracted by the smell.

______ 10. Never try to outrun a bear, it can run more than 30 miles per hour.